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Well that was an eventful read!

You had me on the edge of my seat, attempting to predict the moves of the characters in your story. Well done –  it was very well written.

I admire how you have mimicked Faulkner’s use of differing perspectives throughout his novel, as you have attempted to put yourself into another’s shoes and engage with a new persona.

I love how you are able to immerse the reader into a short 10 minute snippet of his seemingly mundane life, but engage with all the human senses. This is demonstrated by creating a visual image of the persona smoking which leads the reader to be provided with insight into his mental state and his decision making on whether he will beat up the annoying people on the train.

It was a very entertaining read that fully encapsulates Faulkner’s style of writing.