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I have chosen to review your blog as I was slightly confused on the importance of the “Preface of Lyrical Ballards.”

I like the way you have clearly outlined the main arguments and reasons for the Preface, it allows the reader to fully understand the content. You have carefully explained the consequent impact the Preface had on the world of Poets and myself! I particularly the sentence;

“This vision was a cog that turned in unison with concepts that formed around the primary laws of nature and elementary principle of pleasure”

I believe you have thoroughly encapsulated the main ideas of the Preface and answered the Blog question as to why it was so revolutionary for its time.

You could improve this blog by rearranging some words in the sentence as it becomes a little long and wordy to read. I have lots of trouble with this myself and I let my words ramble and loose meaning. It may help to read out-loud your blog a couple of times.

Very enjoyable read! Well done Hamish.