A link to James’ website can be found here. Hey James, I have chosen to review your creative blog 2 where you have written a replicate of Banjo Paterson’s poem, “The Man from Snowy River.” Firstly, I like how you have provided evidence of you stimulus as it allows the audience to be more involved…
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Peer Review 4
Attached is a link to Lili’s website Lili! I was so impressed upon reading your creative poem. I was amazed to see how your words possess such an intimacy which sensitively encapsulate the feelings of girls as they struggle to love themselves. I admire your courage to personally reflect and write about such a topic…
Peer Review 3
Christina’s website here. Hey Christina, I have read your letter 3 times and each time I like it even more! There are so many good things going on and I believe you have written accurately and sensitively to the time period of Ada Cambridge. The girl writing to her mother and sister effectively epitomises the…
Peer Review 2
Hey Tyler! I was very captivated by your creative piece! It was written with such vivid imagery and beautifully encapsulates the realities of working in the Australian environment. I can easily understand your words and you clearly develop a strong relationship between yourself and the landscape. I also appreciate your final sentences where you provide…
Peer Review 1
https://mikaelaswords.home.blog/2018/08/26/the-landscape-i-love-best/ Hey Mikaela, I was most impacted by your blog post where you describe a landscape that you fondly remember. After reading other classmates’ blogs briefly, I had not felt drawn to review their works like I had your own. The first line, “I had been travelling aimlessly for weeks…” I deeply connected with, as…