You can find a link to Tenielle’s awesome blog here.

This is a very personal and well written blog.

I love your use of beautiful, intense descriptions of the ocean landscape, it makes me want to leave this miserable rainy day!

I believe you have beautifully encapsulated the meaning in Emerson’s nature, the return to be apart and whole with nature.

I particularly love the line, “Perhaps I knew that the nature would take this memory and hold onto it for me?” I too hope that nature has held onto some of my fondest memory’s.

Overall I think this is eloquently written, however some of the sentences are very long and this may need reviewing further.

Well Done!