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Hey Vivian,

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your blog. I study art as another one of my units and I believe you have formally analysed the tapestry’s icons and deeper meanings with great insight.

I particularly like your last line, “With its beautiful design and unique presentation of these images, Martin Sharp’s Oz? tapestry is both captivating and entertaining” I have never thought of tapestry as being anything other than something to hang on a wall, and I appreciate your point of view and it has prompted me to think more about the artistic skill and captivating nature of making such a complex piece of work. I admire the way in which you have expressed clearly the symbols of each Australian icon and its subsequent reflection within society today.

The only criticism I would give is to make sure you capitalise your pronouns, as; Opera, Uluru, Ayers Rock, Aboriginal… as these are names of places and important things.

Well done on you blog!